Winter’s Promise – Flash Fiction – 2024/11/25

Posted November 25, 2024 by Olivia in Flash Fiction / 0 Comments

Sugar didn't look like much when they found him at the rescue farm. His white coat was dull and matted, his spirit broken from years of neglect. But there was something in his gentle brown eyes that made Anna believe in second chances.

“He's too skittish for trail rides,” the rescue owner had warned. “And too old for farm work.”

But Anna, whose family had run Pine Valley Lodge for three generations, saw past the horse's wounded exterior.

The first time she brought out the sleigh harness, Sugar had trembled. Anna spent hours just letting him smell the leather, touch the bells with his nose, get used to the gentle jingling sound. She'd talk to him while brushing his coat until it gleamed like fresh snow, telling him stories about the lodge and the families who visited each Christmas.

“Just think,” she'd whisper, “you could be part of their memories. Their stories. Their magic.”

December came, bringing with it deep snow and holiday guests. Sugar watched from his warm stall as other horses pulled the sleigh, their hooves making music in the crisp winter air. Each night, Anna would visit him with carrots and gentle words of encouragement.

“When you're ready,” she'd say, “we'll try. No pressure. No rush.”

One quiet morning, before the guests were awake, Sugar did something unexpected. As Anna walked past his stall with the harness, he nickered softly and stepped toward her. His ears were forward, curious instead of afraid.

“Really?” she whispered, hardly daring to hope. “You want to try?”

The old horse nudged the harness with his nose, making the bells tinkle quietly in the dawn light. Anna's heart swelled. With slow, gentle movements, she opened his stall door.

It took them an hour to get ready. Anna was patient, letting Sugar investigate each piece of the harness, each strap and buckle. When she draped the red blanket across his back, he stood perfectly still, as if understanding the importance of the moment.

The empty sleigh waited in the fresh snow, decorated with evergreen wreaths and ribbons. Sugar eyed it cautiously, but his steps were steady as Anna led him toward it. The sun was just cresting the mountains when she attached the final straps.

“Okay, big guy,” she said softly, gathering the reins. “Just around the barnyard. Nice and easy.”

Sugar lifted his hooves high in the pristine snow, each step deliberate and proud. The bells chimed softly, and to Anna's amazement, his ears perked up at the sound instead of flattening in fear.

They made three perfect circles around the barnyard, Sugar's confidence growing with each step. As they passed the lodge for the fourth time, Anna noticed movement at one of the windows. A small boy in pajamas pressed his face against the glass, eyes wide with wonder.

By afternoon, the story of the majestic white horse had spread among the guests. When a family asked about sleigh rides, Anna found herself looking at Sugar. He met her gaze steadily, as if to say, “I'm ready.”

Their first real ride was with a family of four – parents and two little girls who exclaimed over Sugar's “unicorn-like” mane. As they glided through the snowy forest, Sugar carried himself like a king, his steps sure and graceful. The girls sang Christmas carols, and Anna could have sworn Sugar was keeping time with the bells.

That winter, Sugar became the heart of Pine Valley Lodge's Christmas season. Guests specifically requested “the white horse with the kind eyes.”

Children would bring him carrots and tell him their Christmas wishes. Some even said he was magical – that a ride with Sugar made their holiday dreams come true.

Anna never corrected them. After all, wasn't Sugar's own transformation a kind of magic? Every night, after the last ride, she would brush his now-gleaming coat and thank him for believing in himself as much as she had believed in him.

“You see,” she'd whisper, scratching his favorite spot behind his ears, “sometimes the best gifts aren't found under a tree. Sometimes they're found in a rescue barn, just waiting for someone to notice their magic.”

Sugar would nicker softly in agreement, the sound mixing with the gentle chorus of sleigh bells and winter wind, adding another note to the symphony of Christmas at Pine Valley Lodge.

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